You must sit alone,
head balanced
on your left
hand, shoulders following
the lean, pen
in your right
hand stumbling
across the pages,
scrawling script
on the black marbled mead
you purchased
because where you
are, you had to have
the black marbled mead
composition book
popular in American
movies and T.V. series.
The streets you’ve shown
me are clean,
timeless spires crowned
with brittle cell phone towers.
Alien green kiosks offer information,
beckon seductively.
December 28th, 2008 at 9:25 pm
damn good… shouldnt there be a ‘ on the series’
its ugly i know but i totally blew muh mind staring at it saying it wrong and wondering why
the ending is very good. but alien green is like neon green…. its believable but its also crazy to think of that bright a green on a information kiosk. i mean … it would weather… it would have to be more dinosaur green ^^
December 29th, 2008 at 5:29 am
The alien green kiosks is a nice touch.
December 29th, 2008 at 7:38 am
So Jeniffer, so beautiful. T-h-a-n-k-s.
December 29th, 2008 at 8:23 pm
trent: it’s that way cause it needed to be that way. gawd.
rodger: thank you. wow. nice to see you.
and gabriel: there he is. glad you liked it. :)